"Do not judge strictly"

And why is that? You post it here, you get the treatment like everyone else. If you think it is not good enough, or if you didn't finish it, either wait until you can finish it, or ask advice in forums, or bury it forever. But don't inflict on us what you are not proud of yourself.

As for comments... Do not compartmentalize color, for one. Color must form an integral, interactive system within the picture. Just doing "shading" with darker and lighter versions of the same color achieves nothing; you must think of light and volume, not just what color to paint with. Without a unifying color scheme this is a patch of unconnected color cutouts.

What she meant aparently....by 'do not judge strictly' was that you should consider this artwork for what it really stands for..she s new here...and a 'new' upcoming artist! Therefore she hasnt quite reached a final hence high level of skills yet....try not to be so hursh and strict on her for that . Also english isnt her mother language in order to express her feelings the 'right' way...

I dont think that you are in a position of speaking in part of us all here considering what one should say or not for his/her own work or providing us with 'how to behave in the forum' lessons.

She has posted her work here to improve on her skills and techniques and not be judged as an already successful artist...

Nevertheless...you are 100% right about your comments regarding the colours and the lighting of this piece! So Daremif try and take those into consideration!!! Hope to see more work from you in the future...i think you got the potential of becoming great on what you do...just try and notice more how light interacts with colours in everyday life objects and figures

Like your style. +6

colors beautifull,sweet idea+6

My fav! I love it so-o-o-o. +7